Monday, March 20, 2006

Give Up, Girls!

(From my Archives)

I said to him, When I see you
I begin to drool
With passion he responded
Shut up, You fool!

I said, To be in your arms
is my heartiest wish
He looked me in the eye
deeply, and said, Rubbish!

Then I tried a different
line of approach, a trap
Spoke of souls and mates
and he said, What crap!

I fussed and I fumed
trying to draw his attention
but still on his radar
not even a blip, no mention!

What was a woman to do!
So I gave up and let it be.
The very next day he called
and said, Baby, let's have coffee!

© Smita Rajan
25th Feb 2006

2 Comments:

At 9:15 AM, Blogger Zorba said...

as they say....


'bin maangey motee miley,

maangey mile na bhikh...."



:) awesome way to put it in a strong poetry!

 
At 7:27 AM, Blogger Kabir said...

very nicely thought and written :)

Ravikar

 

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